Story about My Surgery

2 month ago, december 2018 i surgery my spine because i have disosder of my backbone that called scoliosis.
i got scoliosis since i was in 5 grade. first time i realized i scoliosis when my sister look something different of my back bone, and she suggest my mom to go to docter orthopedic and i do x-ray. And i'm scoliosis. since that, i'm doing theraphy for reduce the degree or arch of my spine. cause theraphy no effect to my spine, finally i decided to wear brace on my body. Brace is the clothes buffer iron on the back to help the body to erect and help to reduce spine too. But that's not help my spine even worsen my spine.

Year by year i keep scoliosis, until 2018 i feel bad about my condition of my backbone that's very painful and not comfortable. suddenly my parents think about plain for surgery but they was so afraid, in fact doctor said if the degree severe that above the 40°> should immediately for surgery. and last year i got 51°, that incresingly make me scared. finally my parents want me to surgery.

 14 December 2018 finally i got surgery at Santosa Hospital Bandung, that my first time doing surgery and i can't imagine what happen after that. at 5pm, Before i entered the surgery room i cried and very sad, because i'm very very panic and scared and my father was not beside me because he was on the way to hospital from my home and i with my cousin. and then i entered the room and wait to surgery, the room is very cold and i dont wear anything...just green clothes on me. then i asked random questions by doctor anesthetic while inject me, maybe for distract me not to panic and scared. then i feel sleepy after the third injection and finally i unconscious.

finally surgery was done, i surgery from 6 pm until 1 am. and my condition is drop and bleeding very much then i'm in ICU and i got blood transfusion. that is very pain when the blood come through my hand. then i assisted by respirator the form of hoses that called hose intubation in my throat along the 14 cm to my lung. maybe after 1 hour..i given the oxygen.

i spend 4 days in ICU and my parents,sister,cousin,my friends come to see me in ICU. 9 days i'm in hospital. Now i got titanium on my body, and now i feel better than before. now i'm doing recovery and wait to 6 month later, June 2019 for check and X-ray again my spine.

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Reza : hello widya

Widya : Hi Reza

Reza : Next week we already schools holiday

Widya : yes but i haven’t had a plan for the holidays where

Reza : Do you want to spent holiday with my friend and you can come with us but we dont know the place to be our visit.. do you have a plan ?

Widya : ok, hmm how about got the beach? 

Reza : hmm i think not because i’ve go to there last year with my family, i like art how about go to museum of art in jakarta?

Widya : good idea, i like photography and we can spent to take a picture there. How about we go by train?

Reza : ok good, we go on wednesday and we meet in train station.

Widya : ok see you next week reza

Reza : Ok

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Debate and opinion

Debate and Opinion

Agustus 18, 2018

1. Topic : The Eggs Price Are Higher During Ramadhan

• Pro     : In economic law, if an item amount is less than demand, the price of the item will be high.

• Con    : If the price of chicken and eggs soars, those will cause price food instability

             which make the lower classes unable to buy.

• My Opinion : In my opinion, we can find and consume other protein than eggs, like tempe which is  a local food that we have got and has a lot of vegetable protein.

2. Topic : Saver Crossings

• Pro     : With saver crossing, it makes us safety because we don’t need wait the train topass. Thus reducing the likelihood of an accident because of people who break the rules.

• Con     : If there is a saver crossing,  the construction will take a long time and create traffic jams. It also disrupt the train traffic.

• My opinion : I think saver crossing is better for us because it can increase our safety.

3. Topic : Freeport Deal Still Unclear

• Pro : Government does is good (take the ownership of 51%).

• Con : The income is not higher.

• My opinion : I think Indonesian government still have a lot of corrupt and we don’t have a lot of people who can manage it if Freeport managed entirely by Indonesia.

4. Topic : Sleeping Too Much Or Too Little Can Increase Risk Of Health

• Pro : Based on research, the scientist found that sleep less than 6 hours more a night are both linked with an increased risk of developing metabolic syndrome.

• Con : However, some people feel not good if they sleep less than 6 hours.

• My Opinion : In my opinion, sleep too much or too little can increase risk of health is depends on someone metabolism. If the metabolism is bad, sleep too much or too little can causing a risk of disease. And if the metabolism is good, maybe sleep too much or too little is okay for them.

5. Topic : MUI Disannounce Night Prayer in Monas

• Pro : Istiqlal Mosque is closer and shalat is better in mosque.

• Con : Religion events use monas for Taraweh because there’s too many people.

• My opinion : I’m slightly agree if we choose Monas for night praying like Taraweh, except Ied Fitr. Because night praying in the outside place can cause a lot of criminal acts such as theft. Beside, some people always littering and will cause garbage to be scattered after the completion of the event.

6. Topic : Tanah Abang’s Skybridge

• Pro : It can make time more effective because pedestrians don't have to walk far to get to the market.

• Con : The construction costs of 50 billion Rupiah is too much.

• My Opinion : In my opinion, Tanah Abang’s Skybridge is better to decrease traffic jam. Also, it’s safer for pedestrians because vehicles are not allow to pass.

Offers and suggestion

No. Name                   Offers      Suggestion
1. Isti and Intan             VV              V
2. Luvita and Widya       V              V
3. Astri and Silvin           V              V
4. Asti and Fathimah      V             VV
5. Yustavia and Putri      V             VV
6. Pretty and Vira           V             VV
7. Larisa, Aulia, and
Shaleemar                        V              V
8.  Bagas and Ridwan      V              V
9. Fajar and Ray               V              V
10. Fathan and Abdul    VV             VV




1. Isti and Intan
Offers: Do you want me to take you to ABC Clinic?
Suggestions :
- I suggest that because the service is good
- What if I buy porridge in bazaar for you?

2. Luvita and Widya
Offers : May I give you a hand?
Suggestions : Hmm I suggest you to focus on the half of project and the other half will be working by me

3.  Astri and Silvin
Offers : Let’s go to the library to borrow a book!
Suggestions : What if we learn together?

4.  Asti and Fathimah
Offers : May I accompany you?
Suggestions :
- I reccomend you to change it with sausage
- I suggest you to buy carrot, corn, meatballs, bean, and some spices

5.  Yustavia and Putri
Offers : How about if I give you a lot of money?
Suggestions :
- I suggest you to choose a pink dress
- I reccomend you to buy a chitato.
6.  Pretty and Vira
Offers : Do you want to have a dinner with me?
Suggestions :
- I think you can buy pear, grapes, or watermelon.
- I suggest you to buy Hilo that has more calsium than Dancow.

7. Larisa, Aulia, and Shaleemar
Offers : Do you want me to lend it for you?Suggestions : Maybe you should read this biography book.

8.  Bagas and Ridwan
Offers : May I buy you some food?
Suggestions : How about go eat first?

9. Fajar and Ray
Offers : Would you like if I
buy it for you?

10. Fathan and Abdul
Offers : Would you like to join us?

Announcement

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HELLO GEORGETOWN

We’re bringing you a bigger and better location, with more of what you love about our women’s men’s and weddings & party collections and the introduction of our Ludlow Suit Shop.

OPENING APRIL 2013

In the meantime, stop by our current J. Crew Store located just a few doors down on M Street or shop JCREW.COM (it’s open 24/7).

For hiring opportunities, email georgetown@jcrew.com.

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CALL FOR PROPOSALS

(Fund by the European Commission)

The ongoing outbreaks of H5N1 Avian Influenza in Indonesia have had a significant impact. Since August 2003, more than 10 million livestock have been affected and the H5N1 virus has crossed the species barrier resulting in at least 135 confirmed human cases with 110 deaths. Moreover, the potential exists for the H5N1 Avian Influenza virus to trigger a human pandemic.

Research on clinical disease, virology and epidemiology of H5N1 in Indonesia is needed to understand the ecology and variability in transmission to human. To foster essential research, WHO requests for proposal that will then be evaluated through a review process. The awards will then be made to compentent researchers and institutions focused on research of local scientists and public health professionals. Areas for research include:

1.       Studies of disease ecology, transmission, and epidemiology.

2.       Studies of clinical spectrum and management of disease.

Detailed information of call for proposal, include: application and assessment process, assessment criteria and deadline of proposal submission, is attached and available at WHO Indonesia Country Office Website.

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                                                We are proud to announce

We outgrew our old place

Our new address is:

NeoSys Computer Store

Jl. Melati Utara No. 14

Lumajang – 67316

Our old store becomes our new

NeoSys Service Centre

Same address

Same phone number

Quality for the unmatched performance

Contact us:

089922376549837

www.neosyscom.co.id

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Starting from 1^st January 2018, we open branches in several big cities such as Medan, Denpasar, Lombok and Makassar.

It allows the administrative aspect of our business to be conducted in regional locations. It is hoped that we will be able to meet closely with customers and stores in a more effective manner.

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